After school

Soitu on 10/8/2019 2:52:55 PM
Episode last modified by Soitu on 10/8/2019 2:52:55 PM

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Jon couldn't concentrate in class, he knew it was probably the last time he would see his body as he grew up in. As soon as school was over, he would probably begin his forced transition into a girly girl. He once again cursed at himself for thinking a girly girl was the most likely thing he could be turned into. Now that he really thought about it, it wasn't the most likely at the time. She could have changed him into a lot of things, some of which he would even enjoy in a way. But he had been influenced by all he had seen on the internet when he was alone, with everyone turning everyone else into girls for one reason or another. He had somehow convinced himself that it would happen, and thanks to what he said to Sarah earlier, it probably will. In a way, it still aroused him a little. But every time he felt his cock twitch, it reminded him it might soon not be there anymore. It was a fantasy of him, but it should have stayed that way. It was not something he really wanted to happen, but he made a dumb wish while horny, and he was now stuck living it. He had avoided Sarah the whole afternoon and was hoping it would continue that way. He also turned off his phone, to avoid Sarah's 'curse' whenever she called him. School ended way to soon for his liking, but he didn't stay any longer than necessary. He was the first out of the room and was planning to make a run for the exit, in order to get there before Sarah. However, he didn't even get the chance to try. Sarah was waiting for him right outside his classroom. She didn't waste any time and started talking as soon as she saw him. "Do you want to have your phone always charged up, that you always keep it turned on and close enough to you that you can always answer when someone calls?" She paused to catch her breath before continuing. "Or would you rather have a small irremovable device with unlimited power implanted in your skull that will act like your phone only when I call you and will answer my call automatically?" Finally, she stopped, almost out of breath. Other students were looking at her with strange expressions, but she had to make sure Jon couldn't find another loophole. Jon had been too stunned to react and missed most of what Sarah said. "What? Sarah? How...?" Sarah interrupted him. Now that she stopped talking, she looked almost angry. "That's 3 choices I used to be sure we could always talk! I had to skip my last class to be sure I could see you before you left school! All of that because you found another loophole to stop me from calling you, so good luck finding one with these options!" "Wait, you're angry at me for trying to stop you from ruining my life?!" "I had plans! I knew what I wanted to change and when I tried to call you, I couldn't reach you!" Sarah ranted, almost ignoring him. "Well, now, I'll make sure you can't avoid me anymore!" Jon was tempted to continue debating, but he knew it would be useless. Furthermore, he had a choice to make, but he couldn't remember exactly what Sarah said. "Alright! I get it! Could you repeat the choices? I didn't catch all you said." "Weren't you paying attention?!" "You kinda jumped up on me, remember?" Jon defended himself. "By the time I understood what was going on, you were already giving me the second choice." Sarah sighed, trying to calm herself. "Alright, Pay attention this time!" She said before repeating her choice, more slowly this time. After hearing the choice, he could tell he would not be able to find a loophole this time. It had been some time since she first gave him the choice so he didn't dare to wait anymore. He sighed in resignation. "I'll take the first one, I guess. At least the unlimited battery will be useful." Just as he said that, he could feel his arm escape his control again. It took his phone out of his pocket and turned it on by itself. It looked like he couldn't escape her anymore. Sarah had calmed down after Jon made his choice. She could now finally start changing Jon for real.

First real change (6)


This is a great series, and a very clever idea. Is this something you would like others to contribute to, or is this a story you would like to create yourself?


Perri

10/9/2019 1:03:49 PM

Thank you, I am glad you like it. I have to say I never considered someone would want to contribute to this story. I always thought of it as something I would write alone, and I planned a lot of things I want to do with it that I don't think would work if I had to adapt to what other people write. You can still make another branch and I might add to it if I have some ideas, but I think I'll keep making my own story at the same time.


Soitu

10/9/2019 5:22:52 PM

I did have a sense that this story was moving in a more deliberate direction than many interactive stories. I may contribute a chapter or two, but feel no obligation to add to it. Very interested to see what you have planned!


Perri

10/9/2019 8:25:56 PM

I second that this is a great story. The only thing I wish was different was that mental changes were not explicitly disallowed in one of the first original wishes. I'm tempted to circumuent it by writing an episode where Sarah makes some changes to Jon's brain - I guess it's something that's physical. It wouldn't overwrite who Jon is, but might give him some new thoughts or feelings - which works for me cause I'm not a fan of identity death anyway.


Alojz

10/10/2019 8:11:33 AM

I love the slow burn, and how Jon, Karyn, and Sarah are behaving realistically for the ridiculous situation they're in. A lot of other branches might just jump into the changes without stopping to think through the ramifications of each event, or just let Jon meekly submit without fighting back like a normal person. Keep up the great work


Thewayodaworld

10/10/2019 10:34:15 AM

Thank you. I'm trying to make the characters more realistic than in most other branches, the slow burn is more a consequence of that than something I planned. For the mind change, it's mostly a personal preference. It's not something I enjoy very much and I couldn't justifie the characters not using it unless it was explicitly forbidden. But as I said before, if you still want to add your own chapters, you're more than welcome to do so.


Soitu

10/10/2019 3:42:04 PM

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