Janus: Old friends, new developments

User616 on 1/5/2021 9:47:09 PM
Episode last modified by User616 on 1/5/2021 9:47:09 PM

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Jon and Karyn got off the bus. Androgenous students rushed past them, Jon found it interesting to see such features on faces she recognised. Then she spotted a new twist in a face she knew quite well. "Jon?! What the hell, dude? I thought we were going to do a flip together" Joseph cried. ![](https://i.imgur.com/6z8hYof_d.webp?maxwidth=640&shape=thumb&fidelity=medium) Joseph had been Jon's best bro friend, a guy friend she could confide in. It seemed without genders they were still friends which was odd seeing as Joseph was kind of a selfish jerk most of the time. "Sorry, man I completely forgot. Um.. we can do the next one?" Jon apologized. "You better, once I get my penis, I'll make you a real woman. Maybe you too Karyn, weren't those breasts bigger?" Joseph attempted to flirt. "I can see you're as gross as ever, maybe with a penis doing the thinking you might actually be smarter." Karyn retorted. "Actually, Karyn isn't..." "Jon! can I speak with you in private?" Karyn sharply interrupted, dragging Jon away. "Fine, leave me out again" Joseph shouted after them, turning back to his locker. "We should probably tell all, it feels wrong to leave Joseph out" Jon reasoned. "I've got bigger problems than Joseph, right now" Karyn whispered. "How can it be bigger than... Oh..." "It won't go down and your cuteness is only making it worse" Karyn blushed. "I think I can help with that" Jon leaned in and kissed Karyn. It wasn't how she'd expected seeing as Karyn was taller than her now and she was a girl but she was finally kissing Karyn and he was reciprocating. Breasts mashed against smaller breasts as they pressed against each other. "Let's find somewhere more private" Jon whispered, leading Karyn to the bathrooms. ~~~~~~~~~~Meanwhile~~~~~~~~~~~ Joseph had spotted the attractive history teacher Mrs.Wu. She is total MILF material Joseph thought. ![](https://i.imgur.com/pTgaG64_d.webp?maxwidth=640&shape=thumb&fidelity=medium) Mrs Wu appeared to be acting rather shiftily. No one else seemed to notice (no-one but Joseph had nothing better to do than gawk at a teacher) as she bent down in the corridor. As Joseph admired her ass, Joseph noticed she'd picked up something which glimmered in a very unique way. "She's not supposed to be taking that" Joseph realised as she went into an empty classroom. Joseph followed her in.

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Don't double post. Pick a path and stay there


thun

1/5/2021 11:50:08 PM

thun I don't think there's any rule against writing multiple paths, and multiple paths is kinda part of the point of the site. It's not like anything is being used up.


bigbustgazer

1/6/2021 1:50:52 AM

[MOD VOICE] @Thun: Let's be more constructive with how we word things. Criticism and feedback are fine, but this was not the right way to phrase your opinions. We want to encourage writers here, so try to make sure you're being encouraging, even when you're giving negative feedback. In short: don't be a jerk. @User616: I hope you do keep writing and experimenting with the Fiction Branches format. This website is only improved when new users come here with their own ideas, and their own permutations. As Bigbustgazer states, we do not have any rules against making multiple branches. However, speaking from my own experience, I think you'll engage your readers more if you create more variation between your different paths. Right now, it looks like you're pasting the same branch twice, with only minor changes. I encourage you to be more creative, figure out how these two parallel worlds are different, and how the two scenarios might create different stories. The more differences you create, the more fun your stories will be :) Keep writing, everyone. [/MOD VOICE]


Ms. Cork

1/6/2021 4:25:00 AM

Thanks for the feedback everyone :)


User616

1/6/2021 7:19:32 AM

Really enjoying this world you set up


VeronicaZ

1/6/2021 8:20:23 PM

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