Finding karyn

Lorena Sanches on 4/12/2021 12:51:14 PM
Episode last modified by Lorena Sanches on 4/12/2021 12:51:14 PM

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Jon now Jen, walking awkwardly in her heels down the hall, feeling the boys' morbid eyes on her feminine, bare legs. He observed that Karyn's class was leaving, he tried to accelerate his pace but he could not do it with his strange shoes and new center of gravity, distressed he had to yell at his friend, hating his new female voice. after hearing her name Karyn turns to see a beautiful woman in a white blouse and black mini skirt, walking awkwardly towards her. Naturally he did not recognize her, but when he saw the despair on her face, he decided to stay outside the room to wait for her. Jon- Karyn thank you for waiting I could not have followed you with these shoes. Karyn frowned strangely then looked at the girl's eyes and ... Karyn - Wait…. Jon. Jon- I think now it's Jen Karyn-wow Zoe has a sense of humor and I think she has a good sense of fashion Jon- don't joke I'm freezing in this outfit Kares- for me you are burning As he listened to Karyn's laugh and noticing that he looked down at her skirt, Jon tried to lower it without much success. Jon- I need to find Zoe and find a way to get my body and the stone back. Karyn took her new girlfriend to help her walk and look for Zoe

Thank you, I will take it into consideration


Lorena Sanches

4/20/2021 12:21:41 PM

You have the pronouns all over the place - Karyn is she and her unless you are going to change her sex too? Only Plays use that Name: Dialogue format, it is enough to use a more natural prose format


Great Sage

4/13/2021 12:04:43 PM

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