Mandatory Milf: A safety valve
Alojz on 5/23/2021 2:12:48 PM
Episode last modified by Alojz on 5/23/2021 2:12:48 PM
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*Loud Horny Noises* (13)
Eager to see where you go from here. :) I feel like the chapter where Jon finally becomes Sue is going to require your touch, but if you have any ideas for a final intermediate chapter, I might write that.
Oh yeah, I can totally take on the chapter where Jon acquires Sue's attitude to her own femininity. That said, I'd be keen to still have several episodes of him to setting up some more "perks"/"traps" for his future life, while wondering if he should or shouldn't go for it. Personally I have two in mind I've been thinking about for a while now that I wouldn't like us to miss! I mean, at the least, he might have made sure that Sue's not attracted to women but he's not specified anything about his attraction to men so that would need to be taken care of. I'm pretty keen for scheduling that transition to happen a little *after* David has returned home. It would let us have both some juicy awkward time when his husband appears home while Jon is still as attracted to him as he would be as a boy. And then I'd love to have an episode dedicated to him just anxiously counting down the seconds until Sue's heterosexuality and appreciation of her life partner kicks in, with it hitting him like a bag of bricks.
I actually almost added a thing there recently but my browser crashed when I was writing it and then the mood was gone. Is there anything in particular you're hoping for here?
FYI you can use stuff like the 'Typio' extension that will try and save text input from browser crashes. That or just type everything in word/Google docs and then copy and paste it over.
Just throwing some ideas out there in the hopes of inspiring another chapter! -Higher pitched, younger sounding voice - the incongruence of being so much older but sounding young would certainly be uncomfortable for Sue. -Further Height Reduction - she's already pretty short, but it would still be funny. - Incongruent memories - Ex. Keep his 100% straight male mind until the end, but give Sue an interest in say, giving blowjobs - Age Reminders - anything that would remind Sue that while she's hot, she's still much older. Switch her generational knowledge, give her the back pain of a lifetime of large breasts, give her bad eyesight. Hope this ends up helping at least a little!
Sad to see a potential update got lost with a crash :( Hope the bug bites you to come back to this at some point! I'm really looking forward to the awkward husband scene. In fact, the whole family would be interesting - Sure struggling to make dinner for the family while simultaneously trying to stay in character waiting for mental changes that seem to be taking forever to kick in. I'd also love to see the foreshadowed bigger, more awkwardly uncomfortable breasts wish too.
Oh and don't worry, you were definitely right in seeing the foreshadowing of more discomfort on the boob side of things ;)
The desire to add to this story comes and wanes for me. I mean, I keep thinking about it but whenever I've got actual time to indulge in TGTF fiction I seem to be mostly catching up on my RPs haha. One thing I for sure know would help to motivate me is knowing that I wouldn't be the only one adding to this. I feel that knowing exactly how the story will go, just allows me to play it out in my head so I feel less need to put it down in writing. Other people's contributions introduce enough of the unexpected to make it worthwhile.