Well, try this one

Honestly, much of what you write is too extreme for me (I really don't like transformations that leave people crippled or with parts in the wrong places), but that's a personal preference. How about adding something to this. It's set up so you can do anything without having a villain who caused it, and maybe if you add things other people will too. http://fb.countd.eu/cgi-bin/fbstorypage.pl?page=111218152955Hikaru&path;=nospamstory