Family Swap: Palimpsest
The Guest on 1/29/2022 10:35:27 AM
Episode last modified by The Guest on 1/29/2022 10:35:27 AM
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Thanks for immediately picking up where my episode left off! I was hoping this episode might reveal who the female director was and had once been, but perhaps that can come up later. I hadn’t thought of diversity as a factor in the director’s mind. That, um, could set the stage for what happens next. The director being irritated by the song “Tomorrow” cracked me up. Three great things about Rachel: - a reminder that theater requires more than actors - first character mentioned who’s gone up and down a year (probably a very common effect of the wish, but this episode is the first time that such little shifts have been explicitly pointed out) - first elderly character
“Palimpsest” is a nice metaphor for swaps and could be a title for this branch if it were published as a standalone novel.
I’m guessing “Wacjowski” is a typo for “Wachowski” since I think “cj” is unusual in Polish. http://www.herby.com.pl/indexslo.html , a database of Polish surnames, doesn’t contain “Wacjowski”.
Nobody14 established in “On the Bench” that one of the soccer players was eight. So I made Ji-woo eight too. If Rachel is now eighty-six, she would’ve been born around 1936, assuming this story is set in 2022. So when she was eight, Roosevelt was in office - Ike wouldn’t be in until she was about seventeen. Possibilities: she’s old and getting her presidents confused she was thinking of FDR and not Ike she’s seventy-six which would make her eight when Ike was in office in 1954
“Of course, she'd only been a freshman for a day. Before that, she had been a sophomore, and the day before, a Junior. Unlike some, her changes had been minor, as she'd gone up or down one year...but not anymore.” I’m confused by “up … one year”. It seems that until the wish took effect on Tuesday at 3:47 PM, Rachel was a junior. Then she became a sophomore. And on Wednesday she became a freshman. And now on Thursday she joins the class of ’54 (?). Until that sudden age boost, it looks like she was just going down a year at a time.
I’m sorry if I sound too critical. I love this episode, and I upvoted it. I want to continue the story from here but am not certain about some of the details.