Family Swap: Palimpsest

The Guest on 1/29/2022 10:35:27 AM
Episode last modified by The Guest on 1/29/2022 10:35:27 AM

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Instead of watching eight-year-old Ji-woo play soccer, Connie was watching fourteen-year-old Jill come up to sing "Tomorrow." With her freckles and naturally curly hair, Jill looks as if she had been born to play Annie. But looks weren't much of a consideration for the director, who was more concerned about putting on a good show. Besides, the school was overwhelmingly white. She'd been hoping for at least some minority representation. That, and couldn't one of them picked another song to audition with? How many times would they all have to hear Tomorrow before rehearsal even had begun? He should have picked a different musical. As Jill launched into the number, Connie moved to the side, hoping that they were casting on talent instead of looks. She couldn't take it if she lost because another girl she barely knew looked more the part. Hadn't they ever heard of makeup? Jill wasn't aware her former mother was looking at her competitively. A few minutes ago, a different Stott teen hadn't even been auditioning, Rachel Stott been there to sign up to paint sets and was too nervous to ever get up and sing in front of people. Of course, she'd only been a freshman for a day. Before that, she had been a sophomore, and the day before, a Junior. Unlike some, her changes had been minor, as she'd gone up or down one year...but not anymore. Rachel was an average girl of average build and height, with shoulder length brown hair. With her shy manner and average looks, no one gave her much thought. As the clock struck 3:47PM, she suddenly began to shrink slightly as her skin became wrinkled, and discolored in many places. Her hair turned grey, and she began to stoop over slightly. Her clothes transformed into a flowered dress. One of her knees transformed into a titanium replacement. She squinted suddenly, as she found herself outside in the bright sunshine, staring at a soccer game. 86 year old Rachel Wacjowski suddenly laughed to herself. For a moment there, she'd imagined she was one of these young ones....instead of being here to watch her granddaughter play. =You're getting to be a silly old woman,= she thought to herself. she hadn't been that age since Ike was President.

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Thanks for immediately picking up where my episode left off! I was hoping this episode might reveal who the female director was and had once been, but perhaps that can come up later. I hadn’t thought of diversity as a factor in the director’s mind. That, um, could set the stage for what happens next. The director being irritated by the song “Tomorrow” cracked me up. Three great things about Rachel: - a reminder that theater requires more than actors - first character mentioned who’s gone up and down a year (probably a very common effect of the wish, but this episode is the first time that such little shifts have been explicitly pointed out) - first elderly character


pakkwiman

1/29/2022 10:51:18 AM

“Palimpsest” is a nice metaphor for swaps and could be a title for this branch if it were published as a standalone novel.


pakkwiman

1/29/2022 10:55:42 AM

I’m guessing “Wacjowski” is a typo for “Wachowski” since I think “cj” is unusual in Polish. http://www.herby.com.pl/indexslo.html , a database of Polish surnames, doesn’t contain “Wacjowski”.


pakkwiman

1/29/2022 11:01:21 AM

Nobody14 established in “On the Bench” that one of the soccer players was eight. So I made Ji-woo eight too. If Rachel is now eighty-six, she would’ve been born around 1936, assuming this story is set in 2022. So when she was eight, Roosevelt was in office - Ike wouldn’t be in until she was about seventeen. Possibilities: she’s old and getting her presidents confused she was thinking of FDR and not Ike she’s seventy-six which would make her eight when Ike was in office in 1954


pakkwiman

1/29/2022 11:43:35 AM

“Of course, she'd only been a freshman for a day. Before that, she had been a sophomore, and the day before, a Junior. Unlike some, her changes had been minor, as she'd gone up or down one year...but not anymore.” I’m confused by “up … one year”. It seems that until the wish took effect on Tuesday at 3:47 PM, Rachel was a junior. Then she became a sophomore. And on Wednesday she became a freshman. And now on Thursday she joins the class of ’54 (?). Until that sudden age boost, it looks like she was just going down a year at a time.


pakkwiman

1/29/2022 12:41:32 PM

I’m sorry if I sound too critical. I love this episode, and I upvoted it. I want to continue the story from here but am not certain about some of the details.


pakkwiman

1/29/2022 12:48:01 PM

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