Zoe has a laugh
Marazh-no on 3/1/2022 3:18:01 AM
Episode last modified by Marazh-no on 3/1/2022 3:18:16 AM
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Jon awakens, consequences 1 (1)
I'll follow up to Krystren's comment with a gentle nudge: a good, readable paragraph is usually 3-5 sentences long. Sometimes your story will call for shorter paragraphs or longer paragraphs, and that's okay based on your judgement. Paragraphs with dialog will tend to be shorter in general. But if you have a 6-sentence paragraph, it's a good idea to look back and see if there's a logical place to split it up. Sometimes there won't be, and that's okay. But usually there's a thought that *can* be connected to the previous sentence, but doesn't *have to* be. Like, for example, the sentence "sometimes there won't be, and that's okay." :)
And if I'm already piggy-backing on Krystren's comments, I may as well also repeat: you're making some great contributions, and I'm looking forward to seeing your next chapters!