Snack time
belchest on 3/4/2022 6:24:10 AM
Episode last modified by belchest on 3/4/2022 6:24:10 AM
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Hi again, I just read your new chapters, I like to read them before going to bed, they are a like a fine wine. I'm finding pretty interesting to see Jon regressing more and more (maybe you could write more scenes describing how he is getting used to wear toddler clothes, maybe now he even prefers to wear baby's clothes even when he is alone with Biff, maybe he find tights comfier now, also he doesn't even know how to tie his shoes anymore) . Also, it just interesting to see Biff and Karyn romance. And lastly, I think it would be cool to add a new character on the story, maybe one of their high school female friends is now trapped in the life of a baby boy, something like, or maybe trapped in the life of a cat or a dog. I think this would be a nice add-on, since there wasn't any story of people trapped in the life of animals in this story yet. But unlike Karyn, this person knows she is trapped in the life in else's role, but they can't do anything about. All in all, I'm anxious to see what is next. "Jon stood before now wearing only a pink diaper but still crying. Biff easily picked him up and held him to his chest. Jon started to calm down, enjoying being comforted like this. He wrapped his arms around Biff's neck and nuzzled his face into Biff's chest. He could feel the soft, empty cups of Biff's bra through the light material of his dress" Also, the last thing, I loved this scene so much, the sheer vulnerability and helplessness is pretty cute and somewhat arousing.
Yeah, these are always fantastic adds and an amazing story. I hate trying to pitch ideas to an author who has AMAZING ideas and writing, but it could be fun to see more characters added to the story. Zoe as the babysitter, his mom supervising a sleepover, Mikey as the bully at preschool who's just a year older, Jon not caring about using his diaper in front of Biff to show he's becoming more complacent. But wherever the story goes, I'm on board. Great job! It's a blast!