Trevor faces the day
belchest on 6/13/2022 12:53:41 PM
Episode last modified by belchest on 6/13/2022 2:13:46 PM
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I'm really falling in love with this story more and more with every new chapter. One thing I was wondering, I think the same way reality was bend to make Traver and John as lightweight as actual babies, maybe reality was also bend so that whenever Biff tried to use the bathroom, the pee just go downwards, like defining the law of gravity, I think it would be a funny concept. Also, maybe you're not into it, you are the writer here, but I really think that in the same way Karen is stuck living the life of a woman, it would be somewhat funny to have some woman living the life of a little boy? Although there isn't much difference in the life of a baby boy and a baby girl, so maybe it won't be interesting to simply put a woman in the kindergarten being treated as a baby boy... So maybe, I don't know, showing a girly girl stuck in the life of a 10 years old boy or so (which obviously starts to differ from the life of a 10 years old girl and so on). I just found the concept of a girly teenage girl, who are into pretty stuff, having to be a "disgusting" little boy who plays in the mud and do other disgusting little boy things, absolutely HATING to not be able to wear her pretty dresses and doing ballet, and maybe even being bullied because of showing any behaviour that is not the expect from a teenage boy. The idea of one, instead of falling into their roles like all the previous characters, just feeling miserable and hopelessly, and straight out hating their new lives seems interesting, although somewhat dark, obviously. Maybe a teenage girl switched lives with her young brother, but, like, she remembers what happened, but he doesn't, he just thinks he was always a young teenage girl. I find amazingly dark the idea of a teenage girl feeling envy of her young brother cause now he is living her life and doing ballet and wearing her pretty dresses anda yadda yadda, while she has to play stupid child games and stuff. Also, another reality alteration that would be interesting, in the sense of preventing people from getting out of their roles is: in the same way that Trevor and John aren't able to tell others what is going on (people just hear nonsense baby noises), maybe, if we are talking about a person stuck in the life of anyone who isn't a baby, that person simply not being able to tell others, like whenever they tried... they simply can't form the words and speak out.
^ ^ ^ boy, this would be a top notch story path! i defently feels that the concept of someone having their lives sorta "stolen" by someone who they already knew, would be a cool element to it. Cause, i mean, until this point every swap that happened it involved people having their lives switched with folks they didn't know previously before the swap. So, i mean, the idea of someone seeing another person living their lives, while they are now trapped in the life of that person, but only they remember that something is wrong seems worth exploring