The Fem Master: Jon fakes out the Stone

Klmen on 1/28/2013 3:56:05 AM
Episode last modified by Klmen on 1/28/2013 3:56:05 AM

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Earlier, Mark had made a wish that Jon could only make wishes if it made his life harder. Jon had been thinking about this until Mark had left. unfortunately for him, he had left the stone behind so that female Jon could make her life harder.Jon finally got his chance. He made his brain think about how hard it would be if he weren't a girl to please men and have a period so she wished, "I wish that I, Jon was only a women until this point in time, and were back to my normal self. Also, I wish that I no longer had limit on how I could use the stone." while he thought about how easy it would be now that his wishing options were limited. He instantly became himself again, non-Ginger aspects and all. He now thought of how his friend had lost control, did he really want the same to happen to *him?*"

well that’s a copout. The more obvious action is Jon sacrificing himself by making a wish that makes his/her life a little harder but that absolutely stops Mark in his tracks. Like wishing that both (s)he and Mark would get stricken by a disease that would affect Mark much more strongly and cause Jon to get sick for a day but cause Mark’s limbs to fall off and for him to lose his voice permanently, then Mark would lose his fem-master powers, as that required the use of his hands, and he could never use the stone again if he can’t speak.

lifesmainantagonist

8/14/2023 2:09:49 AM

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8/15/2023 7:07:10 AM