Dreams of Djinni: Jon the Genie

Gooose on 3/16/2023 1:22:54 AM
Episode last modified by Gooose on 7/6/2023 12:02:53 PM

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Jon came to slowly, feeling like his entire body had gone through an industrial thresher. (That tended to happen when you wished to change your very being down to the molecular scale.) Maybe he'd been a bit too hasty making such a big change to himself, but what was done was done. With a slight moan he opened his deep brown eyes to survey the damage. '*Wait, why is my voice so high pitched?*) Jon thought to himself as he started to notice his entire body was sending alien sensations to him. As he lurched upwards two things stuck him at once. First, there was a definite weight on his chest that hadn't been there before. Secondly, and much more alarmingly, his legs seemed to be missing. Startled, Jon fell off the bed, but surprisingly didn't hit the ground, he instead found himself floating on a whispy trail of smoke that existed where his legs should be. Desperate to see what he'd done to himself, he instinctively pulled on a power within himself, causing a floor length mirror to appear in front of him, revealing his new form. ![](https://i.pinimg.com/564x/54/48/6f/54486fc44e6047a854017b1f02c0c393.jpg) Jon gaped at his, or rather herself. She'd become a genie!

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Interesting idea. However, I think it'd be good to have a written description of Jon's new form, instead of relying on a picture.That way, if the picture doesn't appear for whatever reason, we still know what the genie looks like.


Christine L.

3/17/2023 1:22:39 PM

Fair enough, I'll add that in the next chapter as she gets a better look at herself. That chapter had a planned description of the genie version of Linda too, so that's easy enough to add in. Jon will also have a human passing form without the blue skin.


Gooose

3/17/2023 8:02:33 PM

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