Sarah finishes the lockerroom

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Sarah had tears in the corners of her eyes. She was laughing so hard at what was left of the football team. She couldn't wait to see how their next match would go with half the team out of commission or severely hampered by their new situation. "You know what guys?" She spoke of the constant stream of curses, the non stop sound of urine hitting the toilet and the slurping on the large cock next to her. " I think I'm going to leave you now. I think you need some alone time to get used to the new you." She leisurely walked to the door. In the doorway she half turned and winked at the boys. "taataa." The 9 inch boy came running towards her, yelling at the top of his lungs. "I wish that little kid would take better care of his dollies." The tiny athlete was suddenly dressed in a dolls outfit and just before the door closed Sarah saw the younger boy walk to get his toy back. Sarah sauntered through the hallways, finally arriving at the principals office. In front of the office was a waiting room with his secretary. A black haired lady, with a rather angular face. She was sort of pretty and because of that everyone had the same suspicion about her landing that job. Sarah walked in like she owned the place. The secretary, Amy, looked up from her exciting game of solitaire. "Miss McMillan, what did you do this time?" Sarah sat on the corner of her desk and smiled as she replied. "Nothing yet, but I need to talk to the principal." Amy let go of her mouse. "Really? And what is so urgent and please get off my desk." Sarah chuckled. "You know what, I don't think you can tell me what to do. You're just a secretary and I'm the most popular girl at school. The one most likely to succeed in life. In fact, I'm amazed you even have the courage to talk to me. I wish you would realise that." The stone glowed just as Amy opened her mouth. Her eyes seemed to change. Where there was once indifference was now insecurity. Her mouth closed again. What could she possibly say to this gorgeous girl on her desk. Sarah sat there smiling. She wasn't going to waste too much time on this silly thing, but seeing her struggle was just so good. "Did you want to say something Amy?" she inquired with mock interest. Amy's mouth opened again. She wanted to tell Sarah to get off her desk and get lost. She had worked hard to get where she was, life isn't always easy. But she couldn't. Amy said something, so soft it was barely a whisper. Her eyes transfixed themselves on the computer screen, her cheeks flushed red. "I'm sorry, I didn't catch that. I'm just going to leave you here to you 'important' work while I talk to the principal okay?" Sarah said. "nn...o" Amy whispered mumbling. Sarah ignored her weak protests and got up. She walked to the large dark wooden door to the principals office. Behind her she heard Amys chair get pushed back as she got up to pursue the cheerleader.

lifesmainantagonist - Well, it may comfort you to know that there are some branches where the antagonists end up facing consequences while some protagonists begin work on cleaning up the messes. Of course, anyone can have the tables be turned on the antagonist. But of course it's more satisfying if there's a build-up leading to it, instead of it coming so sudden that it's like 'And then the antagonist crossed the street and was hit by a truck'.

Christine L.

11/6/2023 11:35:46 AM

The problem is that all the ‘writers’ don’t have any ambition to actually have the story reach a resolution, they just have whatever conflict is in progress continue for another chapter and have Sarah torturing everyone and then they leave and someone else comes along and does the same thing and it drags on and on and on. This thing needs an ending and honestly I think the best way for it to end is for someone to take her by surprise, like someone who survived their ordeal and knows she’s a monster but has freedom of action, maybe one of the students from the first class after giving the teacher-turned dog a command, leaves school and returns with a gun and then shoots her in the head from behind. And then, after she’s dead, then everyone has to make sense of things and pick up the pieces and to figure out the situation they eventually go to her home and find Jon and Karyn, Jon being mentally incapacitated, but Karyn shrunken but able to tell them what is going on, and then they can finally resolve things with the stone taken off of Sarah’s corpse, the end. The story needs an ending and it needs someone with the ambition to actually do it. I’m tired of almost all of them ending like this, just this indefinite status quo of Sarah torturing everyone or some other horrible situation of some sort that never ends because new people just come along and all they do is just continue what’s already happening with more of the same.

lifesmainantagonist

11/3/2023 11:51:17 PM

Yes there should be a build-up... of the right length and quality. And the resolution shouldn't be too simple as well. Though you're one to talk Christine L: https://fictionbranches.net/fb/story/46462 followed by https://fictionbranches.net/fb/story/46463 followed by https://fictionbranches.net/fb/story/46466 I think I'd have preferred a swift resolution with truck-san to that. Anyway this current chapter is too far. I think a few chapters earlier would be the best place to continue from, but it just would seem so, non-canonical.

lifesmainantagonist

12/7/2023 7:36:43 PM