Sadly, I do...and it isn't good...

Area82 on 4/22/2012 11:20:25 PM
Episode last modified by Area82 on 4/22/2012 11:20:25 PM

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Errr, about your new episode, I have a bit of a complaint. Normally, I like the direction of the story that you are 'painting', you come up with some interesting ideas. However, after looking at that episode...I'm sorry, but I am afraid that I have just facepalm'ed at it. I don't mind the characters interaction, the idea of Lucas healing the physical scars is a nice idea, and I got a slight laugh at the whole Lucas's hidden rage part...but, you're messing with a natural-flowing character development, with the whole healing internal scars, and I need you to stop. That was a very taboo move on your part, and most likely will ended up as a same result with using any other character in the story. And, I am to presume that this happen after school, because it wasn't clear on that. If so, that mean that I'm doing a bit of a flashback, which isn't the first time I did something like that. I don't mind doing that, so don't worry about that. ...Speaking of which, I really need to get back to work and released that bloody episode of mind. If this thing with my movitation kept being a problem with me...I don't really know what I will do, but I may have to do something that I'm uncomfortable with, but a necessary one.

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