Family Swap: Jon Meets "Annie"
pakkwiman on 1/30/2022 9:43:42 AM
Episode last modified by pakkwiman on 1/30/2022 9:43:42 AM
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"Where were you?" (74)
A note about Jon's father: Back in 2008 when I started this branch in "Random family swaps", I made a brief reference to him: *He [Jon] heard footsteps in the hallway outside his bedroom. They were too light to be his father's, but too loud to be his little brother Mikey's.* However, Jon's father was never mentioned again in the branch, and in "Another Mystery", The Guest established that Julie Madison was a "single mother." I'm assuming that Linda Madison was also a single mother, or else Jon would have said something about losing her father when Julie became his mother. To reconcile those 2008 and 2022 episodes, I propose that Jon's father is still alive and that in the initial reality, he still visited his ex-wife's household on occasion, so Jon would know what his heavy footsteps would sound like. Question: Is Jon's original father a Madison, or did Linda Madison keep her last name and give that name to her children?
Why didn’t I make Jon simply ask Tiffany where his house was? Maybe I should have. But I’m thinking that Jon is uncomfortable with the new Tiffany and is reluctant to speak to her again. Also, he’s freaked out by the fact that she now lives in what used to be his house. I imagine her house being subtly different from his: same physical structure but different car, stuff in the yard, etc. That almost-but-not-quiteness has shaken up Jon and left him unable to think clearly.
Linda is a single mother in some branches and married in others...hard to keep track. As for asking...many people also have their address in their phone or the house phone.
*Linda is a single mother in some branches and married in others...hard to keep track.* No problem. When I finally started writing here again for the first time in over a year, I got off to a bad start by contradicting what Nobody14 wrote about Sophie Burger ("a little shorter than other girls her age") and making her replacement Keun-hye, an adult Korean woman, taller. I fixed that right away. Lately I've used the "View story so far" function multiple times so I can have all the episodes from start to finish open in multiple adjacent tabs for reference. I try to check things as I write. This branch dates back fourteen years, so it's unlikely anyone has all the details in active memory. Recently I rediscovered that I had given Zoe's first swapped form a last name (Monaghan) two years ago. *As for asking...many people also have their address in their phone or the house phone.* I considered having Jon find his address on his phone, but I myself don't have mine on my phone, so I had him wander town instead to give him something to do while pondering what was happening. In real life I find long walks useful when I'm overwhelmed.
The Guest, I forgot that I had somehow (accidentally?) pinned my home as a location in my iPhone's map app. I suppose that if I could forget that, a flustered Jon could forget that too. Imagine if Jon Nguyen hadn't pinned his home unlike Jon Madison. Jon would have opened his map app and looked for a pin that didn't exist. I should have had Jon try to use his phone to go home, but I'll let the episode stand as is, since I hadn't made a continuity-violating error requiring correction.