The Workmen: Biff Comes Out of the Closet

The Guest on 4/24/2019 11:43:09 AM
Episode last modified by The Guest on 4/24/2019 11:44:05 AM

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When they arrived, the workmen escorting him deposited him into bed like a package, and covered him up. As soon as they left, Biff burst out of the closet. "Madison...wake up..." Jon sat up. "Biff...what happened to you?" He declared. "What happened to me? What happened to you?" He declared. (_Author's Note: Thought it would be interesting, since the same scene of Biff waking up happens in two branches, if this time, Biff tells Jon what happened._)

Hang on, what day do we think it is? Biff's family and Jon were kidnapped on night 2 and I figured Jon would be returned on night 3, so we'd have to detail what Biff was doing in the meantime on day 3, in between Jon's kidnap and return, most significantly a possible confused Meetup between Biff and Karyn. If we want Biff and Jon to interact on Day 3, I think it'd make most sense on the other branch, right? There it's not set that Jon had to leave for a full day.


Matisguy

4/24/2019 11:53:46 AM

Or are we just wanting to write out the events of Day 3 in the other branch with the understanding that exactly the same thing happened here, and you're wanting Biff to relay the info from that branch? (Btw, for readers that have no idea what we're talking about, read the Reassignment branch instead of Diplomacy branch after the second gurney dream)


Matisguy

4/24/2019 12:10:08 PM

I wanted to, as mentioned, have one branch where we follow Biff and the other where we only hear about Biff's day from him after the fact.


The Guest

4/24/2019 4:57:26 PM

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